do you want critique? If so, I think the first thing is to point out that you need to work on...proportion being the first. Hands are to small and the fingers are all the same, fronts of bodies should be bigger then the distant sides. There is a lack of joints and such, try to work on that maybe by drawing manikins. The hair you drew is just a shape on top of a head, real hair has strands that project from the scalp in cluster, clumps, and curls. Next time, draw the hair as actual multiple strands. Keep practicing, and the best way to get better at drawing anime is to draw real people in various poses (ignoring detail...just the shapes).
