Author Topic: Nenex, a comic I once drew (Read 5896 times)

Stefan Bauwens · « **on:** April 20, 2011, 09:07:06 am »

These are some comics I ever made. It goes about a snake, named Nenex. The story is unfinished though.

EDIT: Added another part I forgot to post.

Munchor · « **Reply #1 on:** April 20, 2011, 09:23:56 am »

First of all, perhaps change the topic name to "Nenex, a comic I once drew". The graphics/drawing are looking pretty nice. The story is good too, but could be more intriguing.

Freyaday · « **Reply #2 on:** April 20, 2011, 09:38:26 am »

I agree with Scout. My tip for the story is to flesh it out more, like how Nenex came to be in the zoo, and if he was a wild snake at one point, perhaps have him miss being free. You need a reason why he's in there and a reason why he wants to get out. Great job, man, can't wait to see where this goes.

Stefan Bauwens · « **Reply #3 on:** April 20, 2011, 09:49:11 am »

Thank you. Thanks for the advice too. I edited the title. I won't be able to continue drawing for a while, because I'm kinda busy.

Freyaday · « **Reply #4 on:** April 20, 2011, 09:50:16 am »

Quote from: Stefan Bauwens on April 20, 2011, 09:49:11 am

Man, Belgium hasn't got a government for superlong. In fact, it's a record.

Umm, what?

Stefan Bauwens · « **Reply #5 on:** April 20, 2011, 09:51:19 am »

What the? I must have pasted something over my text. I'll edit it straight away.

Darl181 · « **Reply #6 on:** April 20, 2011, 03:29:04 pm »

Nice

I remember when I was in fourth grade or something, some other kid was bragging about he supposedly made some comic called "ninja guardian" that sold for 'gazillions' to newspapers worldwide...something that big deserved a parody.
For about two or three years a friend and I made these "Ninja Rabbit" comics, I should find some of them...

Munchor · « **Reply #7 on:** April 20, 2011, 04:13:30 pm »

Quote from: Freyaday on April 20, 2011, 09:50:16 am

Quote from: Stefan Bauwens on April 20, 2011, 09:49:11 am
Man, Belgium hasn't got a government for superlong. In fact, it's a record.

Umm, what?

lolwut?

@Stefan: Too bad, coding Myst?

Stefan Bauwens · « **Reply #8 on:** April 20, 2011, 04:15:36 pm »

Not right now, but I would like to spend some time on it. I just gotta think what I have to do. There are so many steps I can choose from

DJ Omnimaga · « **Reply #9 on:** May 26, 2011, 04:22:06 am »

THis looks nice. You draw quite well

Stefan Bauwens · « **Reply #10 on:** May 26, 2011, 06:45:22 am »

Quote from: DJ_O on May 26, 2011, 04:22:06 am

THis looks nice. You draw quite well

Thank's. But you won't see new comics of me for A WHILE. I'm atm a bit more interested in calcs and such and I'm also quite busy. But maybe I will draw other comics when I feel like it(and have time)

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