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Bobby King8/23/10Block 3Evil Paragraph Actions become evil when one does them to intentionally harm another. One could also be considered evil when trying to instill fear into a person. An evil person knows what they are doing is wrong, knows the consequences, but they do not care about them. Evil can also be brought into the realm of one’s morality. Depending upon what a person believes is right, anyone, or anything for that matter, can potentially be evil that threatens their right or good, if you will. During the Holocaust, the Nazi’s were doing what they thought was good, but to the rest of the world, this was an evil act. Evil could be summed up as a negative action to cause an even more negative reaction, all for the benefit of one’s self. Although, that is not always the case, sometimes there is no benefit, and the person does it solely because they want to do whatever they please, whether that is to kill someone, or rape another. As far as people being born evil, I believe that evil comes from the way one is raised. There could have been a horrible experience in one’s childhood, thus causing them to lose a grip on reality and slip into the world of evil, where all they know are negative things, and everything they do goes through their mind, but they ignore it anyways. In conclusion, evil is an element that isn’t controlled by a person, but unfortunately if one becomes evil it is hard to make them become good.
Actions become evil when one does them to intentionally harm another. One could also be considered evil when trying to instill fear into a person. An evil person knows what they are doing is wrong, knows the consequences, but does not care about them. Evil can also be brought into the realm of one’s morality. Depending upon what a person believes is right, anyone or anything that threatens their beliefs can be evil. During the Holocaust, the Nazi’s were doing what they thought was good, but to the rest of the world, it was evil. Evil can be summarized as a selfish negative action that causes an even more negative reaction. Usually, the doer of such actions benefits from them. Sometimes, they do not, and the person does it solely because they want to do what they please, whether that is to kill someone, or rape another. As far as people being born evil, I believe that evil comes from the way one is raised. There could have been a horrible experience in one’s childhood, thus causing one to lose a grip on reality and slip into a world of evil. In this world, one's mind is filled with negative thoughts, and even though one knows that what one is doing is wrong, one chooses to ignore both morality and common sense. In conclusion, evil is usually a selfish act that damages another person. People are not born evil, but are instead influenced by their families and surroundings to become evil. Evil acts lead to more evil, and it is extremely hard for one to leave this cycle of doom
Please read it aloud.Don't mean to criticize/patronize, but it looks quite boring due to lack of sentence structure variety.Also, don't repeat "evil", find more words to replace it so that you don't sound repetitive.Depending on how your paragraph is being graded (and possibly the topic), it may be better to try and avoid using any 1st/2nd person words, including I, me, my, we, you.
Depending on how your paragraph is being graded (and possibly the topic), it may be better to try and avoid using any 1st/2nd person words, including I, me, my, we, you.
Some people in vacations sometimes messed up and accidentally went to the canadian city instead of the one in Australia.