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Title: What I wrote in creative writing
Post by: necro on January 27, 2006, 07:02:00 am
well, we had to write a story to prompt in creative writing...then pass it off to the next person so they could work on it more. Well, I tend to write some greusome stuff...and on most of them I did...but on the last pass off, I got a story about a guy and a girl dating. I couldn't resist...I wrote this:

"Nathan had asked Rachale if they could go to study, when asked what for, he claimed anatamy class. While he may have wanted to learn, his mind was far from on class...though it was surely on anatomy. As the night progressed, he felt the urge to feel...to explore...to touch places he would never dare to touch. The candles burned down and they began to kiss, and the more he kissed the more he burned inside. His long dark tounge found its way down her throat, and he found his hands undressing her, and she him. Nathan took Rachale into his sinewy arms and held her in embrace, his muscles bulged and rippled as he held her to him. He wrapt him self around her, and then inside her...their sighs let way to moans of joy and pleasure, anouncing their love to the walls around them. They lay together on the cold floor, far from cold."

and I had to read the story...youd never believe the look on the teacher's face. Her comment was: "...um, lets move on."  It was awsome...the whole class was in fits of laughter...and the girl who started the story was a bright shade of red.
Title: What I wrote in creative writing
Post by: Ranman on January 27, 2006, 07:52:00 am
Uhhh... I don't know if I would be able to read that in front of the class. O_Oshocked2.gif How did you keep a straight face?  :???:confus.gif

That was much easier to read than you Senior reflective essay. ;)wink.gif
Title: What I wrote in creative writing
Post by: tifreak on January 27, 2006, 08:24:00 am
ROFL!!!!!!

We had to write stories for out english class, And I so ripped on the Star Trek universe. The teacher was laughing so hard she was holding her sides... :Dbiggrin.gif
Title: What I wrote in creative writing
Post by: dysfunction on January 27, 2006, 08:29:00 am
I remember a story my junior English teacher read; it was written for a cooperative project by two college English students where one had to write part of the story and email it to the other, then the other had to write the next part and email that, and so on. The girl started it, and it was all about some girl just drinking tea and 'reflecting,' and while decently written, was extremely boring. Then the boy wrote his part, and it went like "While ten light years away, the starship commander cared nothing for the pathetic little girl drinking her stupid pansy tea; instead he was about to blow up her whole stupid little planet." Then it went back and forth with each insulting the other's story. It was hilarious that college students could be so dumb; then again, I go to community college... there are some real dumb people here...
Title: What I wrote in creative writing
Post by: Spellshaper on January 27, 2006, 08:51:00 am
 :bounce:bounce.gif:imbeciles:morons.gif:bounce:bounce.gif


LOOOOOOOOOOOL...

Well, I only made and had to read some really blood-dripping apocalyptic stories as creative writings... ;)wink.gif
Title: What I wrote in creative writing
Post by: tifreak on January 27, 2006, 09:06:00 am
lol, Any of you here watch the old star trek shows, with Captain Kirk? Remember how he used to be hitting on all the pretty ensigns, and what not? Yeah, that was what mine was about... :Dbiggrin.gif Good times...
Title: What I wrote in creative writing
Post by: Ranman on January 27, 2006, 09:20:00 am
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lol, Any of you here watch the old star trek shows, with Captain Kirk? Remember how he used to be hitting on all the pretty ensigns, and what not? Yeah, that was what mine was about... :Dbiggrin.gif Good times...  

 The original Star Trek is still the best.
Title: What I wrote in creative writing
Post by: spengo on January 27, 2006, 10:05:00 am
HAHA, that's great. XDgni.gif

star trek pwns! And yeah, there was always a new pretty lady for kirk to hit on in almost every episode. If there wasn't, then his yeoman accompanies them down to whatever planet they are visiting and she took that role.  
Title: What I wrote in creative writing
Post by: tifreak on January 27, 2006, 10:23:00 am
Well, mine made fun of Kirk and those senarios... :Dbiggrin.gif

I think I called it The Revenge of the Female Ensigns... :lol:bounce2.gif I got bonus points for original and humorous thinking...
Title: What I wrote in creative writing
Post by: DJ Omnimaga on January 27, 2006, 01:14:00 pm
fun stuff :Dbiggrin.gif and I need to watch the old star trek again havent seen them for several years ^^
Title: What I wrote in creative writing
Post by: necro on January 27, 2006, 04:47:00 pm
wow...I didn't expect I'd spark a star trek discusion.  I don't get that...sex scene=?=star trek?  Oh well...weirder things have happened.
Title: What I wrote in creative writing
Post by: Spellshaper on January 28, 2006, 02:21:00 am
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Title: What I wrote in creative writing
Post by: Ranman on January 28, 2006, 03:52:00 am
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