Hey all! I'm back after a long time of no activity (school is very time consuming this year).

So, I've been playing around with some music software lately, and I found out that I am actually decent at composing.
These two songs are semi-finished, meaning they are finished for now, but I might come back and improve them later.

Any questions, comments, concerns, criticisms, 42s, (the) games, rickrolls, or (blue) lobsters?

Oh! It's my second coming! (halo of light descends upon my head... then shatters into a million pieces).

Thanks! =)

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Lol

FL Studio. Cracked. I do plan to buy it, but don't have the money right now. So I'll stick to thr cracked version until then =(.

Wow I wonder why they're MP4's yet they function like MP3's?

I liked everything about your first post but one thing.......
U MADE MEH LOSE >

^^^^^ Correct

I like them, but my favorite is the 2nd one actually. I think in the 2nd one you should maybe add a bass, kinda like in the 3rd song or maybe using the instrument in the first (without reverb) as bassline, but of course much less loud. In the first one I think you should reduce the volume of melodies actually so it doesn't drown out the percussion too much (which seems to happen to many people).

By the way what I found out is that for certain music styles, buying the music software isn't often the main issue because sometimes they got cheap versions available (Sony ACID Music Studio comes to mind, MTVMG too, but MTVMG doesn't support VSTis) and others are freeware (such as LMMS). The problem is often how you also have to spend hundreds of dollars on virtual instrument plugins and all that crap. For example if I wanted to produce metal music using pro guitar VSTi's, I need to buy Shreddage and Kontakt, which is like $300 together IIRC, add to that plenty of other things, and freeware VSTs often do not sound realistic enough.

Also you should upload MP3s instead of M4A and MP4 files, because I think the latter two can only be opened in iTunes or Quicktime.