Hmm to be honest I don't like the first, sorry. The problem is that the bass is completely off-key. :S You might want to fix that (using headphones is a must for bass)
As for the 2nd one I think it's better, although it might be nice to add some reverb (not too much) to the guitar, since the synths and the piano seems to have some sort of small reverb effect. Also the piano seems off-key from time to time.
