hmm, I don't know if we have a topic for this type of thing, so...yeah...post your songs that you have written and/or Free-verse poems
here is my first one tell me what you think

I have found myself lost,
lost inside this sick culture
wanting more to be shown
more to be given
more to be taken
this ever beating heart
growing faster and faster
wanting more and more
this ever increasing need
why?
we've lost our morality
continual loss of life
yet we laugh
"It will never be us
we are invisible"
this mindset is bringing us to defeat
never have I believed so strongly
and cried so softly
Do we not see?
do we not know?
our sick perverted minds
we feed them continually
bringing us farther into this laughable life
lies! deceit!
we fill our minds with them
never aware of the consequences
closing off our hearts
dehumanizing others because of our close mindedness
falling farther and farther
sinking in
all around us our society is failing
yet we laugh
rejecting the truth
instead taking hold
of the gluttony of the lies
that whisper in our ear
it's not of the truth
slowly we are being sweet talked
into eternal suffering
life that was ours
slowly being stripped away
never has such a crime been tolerated
yet humankind tolerates it well

some of us don't
some of us cry out in distress
but those around us
they supress our shouts
closing off our rebellion to evil
accusing us of doing the same
fair?
who ever said the world was fair?
but then who said we couldn't make it that way?
we seem good at making eternal judgment on those around us
now I will discriminate against us all
by calling us all prejudice

A world of hate
that we have brought upon ourselves
yet we refuse to believe

well I don't follow any of the rhyming or poem rules either...
I just write what comes...

The lyrics are interesting, and they seem to flow fairly well to me.

I wrote a kind of bad rap about bodybuilding (something that my older cousins are into) before that I guess I’ll share anyway. It wasn’t ever finished, but here it is:

Five foot two, 300 pounds
See girls starring at my ten-pack
when I look around;
press six times my own weight
my pecs are f**king mounds.
Joe says he does more
dude get out of town!

Joe's jacked on roids
has f**king pecs on his deltoids
his girlfriend's name is Lloyd
(anybody else getting annoyed?)

cause I am - his body's shot
combined with Synthol...
his body's staring to rot
no regard to symmetry
he thinks he's cool, but he's not -
cause nobody cares about someone
who curls more than he can squat!

[DJ scratching effect, then another rapper comes in]

Just started bodybuilding
(doing) sets of 2s and 3s -
can't lift the dumbbells,
so I bounce them off my knees!

Don't got arthritis
- get plenty of milk and cheese
I'm fine with dairy
 - but allergic to flies and bees.
When they get near me,
I tend to cough and sneeze.
And I have asthma,
so I occasionally wheeze!
(But can we get back on topic, please...)

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Note that this rap doesn't necessarily reflect neither me nor my opinions.