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« on: November 17, 2007, 10:41:00 am »
I've been experimenting around with Acid again.
Here's what I came up with:

Edit - here's the most recent render:
http://www.mediafire.com/?ct0ftyb71oj

Let me know what you think :)smile.gif
Thanks!

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« Reply #1 on: November 17, 2007, 12:55:00 pm »
quite nice melody actually,  SUggestions:

-Increasing kick volume by 15-35%
-Also For the synth used from middle to the end of the song I would use an harder song, like in trance songs, and make it so it fades out a bit longer
-add a synth pad in some part of the song to go along with the synth pad used for bass

Otherwise nice work so far. :)smile.gif I should really get into acid again at one point to remix some of my old songs (altough i will stay with mtvmg for old skool ones)

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« Reply #2 on: November 17, 2007, 01:11:00 pm »
Which synth should I change?
Should I change the synth that does the repeating 3 notes?
Or do you mean one of the "background" synths?

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« Reply #3 on: November 17, 2007, 01:16:00 pm »
its hard to explain really x.x, I mean the one that goes slower and that is the loudest


Oh also I noticed something else in the part  where beat is about to start again whrere it does like:


kick 2 3 4 kick 6 7 8 kick 10 11 12 kick 14 15 16 kick kick kick kick

Idk how else to explain it but you should add a snare roll that fades in and cymbals in that part

EDIT: example of hard synth to add is the one that starts at around the middle of my timgul song

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« Reply #4 on: November 17, 2007, 07:43:00 pm »
Alright, I've made a few changes to the song.

Edit - here's the most recent render:
http://www.mediafire.com/?ct0ftyb71oj

How is it now? :)smile.gif

Took me a while to get it rendered because of a glitch in Acid that caused it to freeze when it got to a certain point in the song.
Still not sure what caused it :Ptongue.gif

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« Reply #5 on: November 17, 2007, 10:23:00 pm »
much better now, but it seems like the sound of the changed synth was recorded at 11 KHz or something because there is so few treble, I would make it have more treble if its possible in sytrus. But nice job in overall on the song, and even if the changed synth doesnt have much treble it sounds much better than before

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« Reply #6 on: November 18, 2007, 08:51:00 am »
k, I increased the trebel

http://www.mediafire.com/?ct0ftyb71oj

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« Reply #7 on: November 18, 2007, 09:39:00 am »
I think it's pretty good.  It's a bit long, but it seems as if many songs from this genre, including xlibman's music, are kind of long.

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« Reply #8 on: November 18, 2007, 09:45:00 am »
It's not that long O_Oshocked2.gif in fact its the average of a techno song, lot of mines are 2x longer

EDIT: oops missed the new version download, gonna listen to it asap

EDIT 2:  Perfect sound effect! :love:love.gif:love:love.gif:love:love.gif:love:love.gif:love:love.gif:pop:xplod.gif:love:love.gif:love:love.gif

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« Reply #9 on: November 18, 2007, 05:09:00 pm »
QuoteBegin-nitacku+17 Nov, 2007, 16:41-->
QUOTE (nitacku @ 17 Nov, 2007, 16:41)
I've been experimenting around with Acid again....

 ROFL, very funny! It is actually sounding very good, I am starting to tap my leg now XDsmiley.gif

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« Reply #10 on: November 18, 2007, 05:48:00 pm »
uhm kalan by Acid here he meant the software from Sony, not what you think <_<dry.gif

but noticeing it now it sounds funny :Dbiggrin.gif

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« Reply #11 on: November 21, 2007, 09:54:00 am »
Am I hearing things or does at 5:08 there is a voice whispering "omnimaga"? o.oblink.gif

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« Reply #12 on: November 21, 2007, 11:38:00 am »
 :Ptongue.gif That's just a reversed loop that came on a cd with Acid Music Studio.
I think the voice is an announcement at an airport since the loop is named "airport later".

Now that you mention it, I think I do hear a voice saying Omnimaga :evil:evillaugh.gif
Haha, it makes the song that much better.

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« Reply #13 on: November 21, 2007, 12:16:00 pm »
yeah it was funny when I noticed it I was like... hmm is it a coincidence o.oblink.gif